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Old 06-24-2002, 09:18 PM
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Default Spirit Play!

(Well...sorta...I kind of jumped straight to the out takes...ehhehehehe)

Hello! This here is Spirit play! I'll be using a mix of Oddworld and non-Oddworld characters in to decide the cast....

Hmm...I think I'll use Drakkics for the horses...Spider can be Spirit.

Spider: !!?? I ain't no damn horse...

Face it are the best drakk for the job. *sticks a mane on him*

Spider: Oooohhhh the humiliation....

Oh quiet...You have Shriek as Rain so you have that going for you...

Shriek: And who says I am willing to do this?

*groan* You just are! Now...for the rest of the cast...
My Saurian character Onul will be Little Creek...

Onul: *looking at script* Question!


Onul: The script says I ride 'Spirit' a couple times during this...just how am I going to 'ride' Spider with those spines!?

Onul: *pained look* I am going to dread those scenes....

Annnyyywaaayyyy...Rattler was hard one to cast, as I don't really have that many 'baddies' that 'survive' my stories. Hasik will be him.

Hasik: *looks at Spider*

Spider: *tail twitches and glares back at Hasik*

Hasik: *under his breath* this is going to be fuuuunnnn.....

Chiatsa: HEY! Cast me in this so I can kill that bastard!

There is only one real female character in this Chia...and that role is taken. are out of this one...and Rattler doesn't die in this story!

Chiatsa: I can fix that...*checks her blade*

Oh no you don't! *pushes Chia out*

Chiatsa: *screaming* You'll be hearing from my agent!

Whatever. Ok...moving along, the 'bad' humans will be played by sligs.

Spider: Well at least I get to beat up on Industrial sligs...*grin*

Slig extras: *nervous looks*

Oy! This is just a play! You can't go hurting anyone intentionally!

Spider: Drat...

The rest of the indians will be mudokons.

Onul: Isn't it a bit weird for the rest of the humans to be sligs or muds?

Spider: *reading script* And how the heck can I buck with no hind legs?

Shriek: *reading her copy of the script* Wait a minute! I get shot!?

Spider: That reminds me...lizard boy here rides Shriek? I'm the only one that 'rides' Shriek if you get my drift...*sly grin*

Shriek: *giggles and blushes*

*bangs head on the wall* This is going to be soooo much fun......

Ishtar: I foresee nothing but a lot of pain in this...*puts on a nurse hat*
(Mesa going to be skipping alot...besides...out takes are the best part of the show anyway *grin*)

Scene: Colt Spirit licking icicle

Spider: *tongue gets stuck on icicle*

*Camera pans to the rest of the herd*

Um...Spider you're supposed to reappear now...

Spider: *still stuck* I kna! Gut is ing aing reaking off!

Oh dear...*turns to the the prop slig* I thought you weakened that thing enough...

Prop slig: I thought I did too...

Spider: Some elp ere!


Scene: Spirit investigating the human camp.

Spider: *sniffing a boot* *Backs up making a face* PPPEEEEUUUWWWW....Ever heard of Odoreaters bud?

Slig1: uh.....

SPIDER! You are not supposed to talk!

Spider: I'm not *looks over script* so THAT'S why I don't have any lines...


Take Two

Spider: *sticks nose in boot, then tosses it*

*Boot bonks a sleeping slig*

Slig1: Ow! Hey what's the big idea! *throws boot at another slig*

Slig2: *is awakened by boot to head* OW! Yer bastard!

Slig3: Shhh! Guys look! *points at Spider*

Slig: Whoa...look at that stallion...

Spider: *looks up from his search and beams* Yep. I am a stud...what can I say?

*bangs head* Oh talking remember?

Spider: Oops...


Scene: Spirit's capture.

Spider: *gets a rope around his neck*

Slig2: Got yer now! *pulls rope taunt*

Spider: *starts turning blue* gak...gak...too...Tight! *passes out*

Slig2: oops....

*sigh* Medic!

Take two

Spider: *grabs rope with a hand foot and swings slig into wall*

Slig: *ko'ed*'re supposed to lose here...

Spider: D'oh!


Scene: Human fort: Blacksmith

Spider: you mean yer going to have my spines cut off!?

They'll grow back Spider....

Spider: But still...

Just go with it!

Spider: ok ok....

Smith: *reaches to cut a spine*

Spider: *bites him*

Smith: YEOW! That was too hard ya bistich! *Looks at teeth shaped holes in hand*

Ishtar: *sighs and heals him*

Smith: *mutters curses and has Spider muzzled*

Spider: *after Smith finishes clipping...pins him against the post*

Smith: Gak! Yer crushing me!

You were only supposed to get his hand again Spider....

Spider: *shrugs*



Scene: Breaking Spirit

Spider: *bucks a slig off*

*slig hits Rach*

*Both KOed*

Spider: Um...MEDIC!

Take two

Spider: *sends another slig flying....this time into the camera*


*Has ice pack on her head* Um...try not to be so forceful next time Spide ok? *Mutters something about a good thing she had renters insurance...*


Scene: Little Creek

Onul: *tied to a pole making owl sounds*

*Knife comes flying over wall and lands near him*

Onul: *reaches for it with foot* Um...not close enough!

It's at the marked distance...

Onul: *grunts as he strains*

*Ripping sound is heard from one of his shoulders*

Onul: *hollars in pain* Ow! I just tore my shoulder muscles!


Take two

*Knife comes flying and handle side hits Onul in the groin*

Onul: *goes cross-eyed as he falls over* too close...way too close...*groan*

Spider: *winces* I felt that one....ow....


Scene: Rattler breaking Spirit

Spider: *bucks, runs, jumps, until he is too exhausted to move anymore8

Hasik: *starts making his 'anything can be broken' speech*

*midway Spider gets his second wind and rushes the coral fence, then stops suddenly...throwing Hasik off*

Hasik: YIIIEEEE!!!! *lands in manure*

Um...a little too soon Spider...and he is not suppose to end up in the shit pile...

Chiatsa: *laughing* Hey keep it! I liked that!

Hasik: *pokes head out of shit pile* you would...*scowl*


Scene: Destroying the steam engines

Spider: *running as fast as he can*

*Tumbling engine gaining on him*

Spider: I can make it! I can make it!

*Engine tumbles on top of him*



Onul: he didn’t make it…ew…Talk about road kill…


Ishtar: *sighs and goes to rez Spider*

Scene: Canyon chase

Onul: No way I have riding him! He has his spines back! It was bad enough when I rode Shriek…

Spider: *growls* You insulting my Shriek? *advances*

Onul: No…No! *Backs away* I didn’t mean it like that! GAH! *runs*

Spider: *chases after*

Guys! That’s not how the scene goes! *groans*

Scene: Canyon jump

Spider: No ****ing way I can jump this…. especially with lizard boy on my back…

Onul: I have to agree…couldn’t we just use CG for this shot?

We don’t’ have the budget for that…don’t worry…the safety harnesses well keep you safe.

Onul: well…ok…lets go get this over with..

Spider: *sighs, runs toward edge*

Prop guy: Wait! I didn’t hook you up yet!

Spider and Onul: *is in mid jump* Now he tells us…*falls* AAHHHHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh


Ishtar: I know…I know…

(if I think of more I'll add to this...*grin*)

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Old 06-25-2002, 08:12 AM
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Hehehe, cute!
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