The preset After Effects intro should be ditched for something that doesn't look like it was bought in a pack. Also the music is awful. I thought Big Room House died like 3 years ago.
In regards to the lets play itself, you need to talk more confidently. At the moment it feels like I'm watching an even less entertaining Crashpunk, and I didn't think that was possible.
Edit: Varrok wanted me to add something encouraging so here you go:
You're not going to get anywhere, you're not going to get views and you're not going to be popular, even if you do get really good at it. The market is way too over saturated now, it's pretty much impossible to break out, so if that's your goal, it's pointless.
However if you're just doing this because you enjoy it and you want to keep enjoying it, then who cares about that other stuff. Do whatever you want, just don't count on it as a source of income.
Originally Posted by Varrok
Last edited by Nepsotic; 11-23-2016 at 10:14 AM..